Nice job! It could be the way this was recorded, but I feel that both pieces call for a softer touch than you displayed in these videos. Good job though I look forward to hearing more from you 
Thank you sir!
Yeah, I totally agree. The sound in the record is very harsh cause he didnt record audio seperatly, and then to high rec levels on top of that. :O
But still I also think that I should softer the touch much more and also calm myself down a bit.
