The piano is nicely in tune and the acoustics are good to my ear. Because of this, I am able to better compare this with the 7/15/16 recording you made. I listened to this current version twice and the 7/15/16 version one more time. Since the 7/15/16 version was not played on a real piano (please correct me if this is not true), it is not an ”apple to apple” comparison. As a non-player, non-musician, my thoughts may not be worth a whole lot. Here are my thoughts anyway:
I very much enjoyed this performance! This is a tough piece. You are doing great!! I hear improvements in sections of this new performance. Overall though, the 7/15/16 version appears to have a more relaxed and controlled sound to my ear. Is it possible that you are not fully comfortable with the action of a real piano or this particular piano? Thank you for sharing this performance!