That's brilliant! Any chance of posting the score?
Thanks for posting this and kudos to you for posting an original composition. To me, it definitely has some nice moments (like ~2:00) that I would've preferred to hear further developed. However, it sounds more like a collection of atonal improvisations strung together rather than a movement of a sonata.While I realize you aren't going for a strict sonata form, I can't really find a motif to follow and therefore lose the sense of time and position when listening to it. Having left it on repeat for the last 20 minutes or so, I can't really tell when the piece has started over, or for instance if I didn't look at the timestamp I couldn't say, "the piece is coming to an end" or "this is the middle section".That being said, of course not every sonata has to sound the same, just my 2c