A couple thoughts. First of all, this was your first time playing the whole thing, yet you have it memorized and you're playing it as fast as you are? Makes no sense. Secondly, the camera cuts are dizzying. If you played it all in one sitting, just have the camera sitting there. It's very distracting and gives the impression that you took 50 takes and spliced them all together. Thirdly, why choose a tempo that you have to slow down at the difficult/sticky parts to get through? Why not just choose a more manageable tempo that you can play continuously through?On a more positive note, it seems you have it under your fingers. I'm sure you'll be able to play it better with that technique.