Pale Horse (original)

[mcnei444]

Hey all, I've lurked here for years as a piano teacher of 20 years looking for tips. Over the past couple years I've begun composing my own works. I'm not really sure how good they are, or if they're worthy of being pushed farther out into the open. Friends and family are going to be too biased. So give it a listen and lmk what you think please

[dogperson]

I am not able to play your submission: I received a triangle  with a diagonal line through it.  I tried multiple times.

[mcnei444]

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1YB8diPtEamYkEbAAQmtqP4XFlRhDR3Aj/view?usp=sharing

i turned it into an mp3. does this work?