Nice job! I would think a bit more about the tempo changes or rubato you use. Right now the tempo changes feel a bit too jerky. Carefully think through your choices and check that they all feel and sound organic when you listen. Right now the tempo changes feel a bit like you are not fully in control over the tempo. If the listener gets startled, it's a bit too much.
How are you recording this? Your playing deserves better sound. I get the feeling you are playing on a fairly decent piano
Well done! I think your playing is very imaginative. Lelle may have a point about the rubato, but please don't lose your expressive approach while trying to correct it.How are you recording this? Your playing deserves better sound. I get the feeling you are playing on a fairly decent piano, and that it should be possible to get a better-recorded piano sound with just a bit of experimenting or possibly slightly better equipment.
If I was a betting man, I'd say it's a digital piano. Something tells me it's digital...
Well played. Your phrasing style at times likes to have a lot of acceleration. I don't think it is objectionable, just different.