This is a very beautiful performance! The tempo was quicker than I am used to hearing, but your tempo is great.
You made the comment “This piece is surprisingly difficult to get right, and I would say it would be wise to play it as an encore rather than walk out on stage and begin”. This implies to me that you must not be totally happy with how this performance went, OR you had problems with other performances in the past by beginning with this work. Would you care to share any issues that you see with your performance here of this piece?
I’m going to get extremely picky here. Just some possible very small things relating to tone control and rhythm that maybe were the result of your walking on stage and playing this piece cold. You say “Comments and discussion are welcome and appreciated!”.
You chose to NOT play the B-flat at the beginning of measure 2 and 3 contrary to that notated by Debussy. I actually prefer this and I think most pianists do the same. Please correct me here if this is not true. As such, I feel the left hand should EXACTLY match in measures 3, 4, 5 and 6 how it sounds in measures 1 and 2 since they are the exact same notes with no indicated changes in dynamics. Measures 1 and 2 of your performance have the LH notes sounding clear with each note at the same volume. For measures 3, 4, 5, and 6, some of the LH C’s and D’s are not coming out clearly. Also, the RH (Right hand) rhythm in measures 4 and 5 is not quite correct to my ear. There may be a couple other very small issues of this type. EDIT: Maybe the RH rhythm in meas 4 and 5 is ok but the RH is not in sync with LH? Maybe problem comes from the LH C's and D's not being clear?
PLEASE CORRECT ME IF YOU OR OTHERS FEEL OTHERWISE.
Lelle made the comment: “You use a slightly "aggressive" touch in the melody, which I don't think is suitable for the dream world of this piece”. This is a valid observation. I think that the slightly aggressive touch is fine. Lelle also says “It feels slightly restless or anxious at times - a certain "busy-ness" that I don't think is necessary”. This is also a valid observation. I found this to not to be the case for me personally.
Having said this, your performance was quite lovely and very enjoyable to me. The build-up to minute maker 1:00 and sudden decrescendo gave me goose bumps.
P.S. Lelle and I look forward to hearing from you, Masterraro. But we understand if you are too busy!
