Invention 13

[truecam]

Idk how this sounds I don't have a piano teacher so I am not sure if this is good or not whatever. Thank you for reading/ listening. Any tips would help be harsh idc.

[lelle]

Good job! I think you have established a good foundation. I would work on polishing it by applying targetted practice to the parts where mistakes happen. Just take short fragments and work on them patiently and slowly so you really absorb them. It's also often easier to focus and polish something if you're just working on a small chunk and know that you don't have to slog through the whole piece.

The second thing I would do now is to think about how you want to shape the two voices in this piece to play them as beautifully as possible. Maybe even play each voice separately and really listen and think about how you want to phrase it.