Thoughts on this section of a piece I wrote a while ago?

[ravelfan07]

It’s at Allegretto (specifically about 100bpm)
What do you guys think? (I wrote it about 7 months ago without listening to it once, just relying on chord progressions and prior melodies in my head, have only listened to it after I finished writing this section)
ignore the first 2 chords btw

[ravelfan07]

As well as ignore past measure 33
It’s just a transition into a slower section of the waltz I was writing

[pianistavt]

looks very interesting
do you have a recording?

[liszt-and-the-galops]

looks very interesting
do you have a recording?

Was going to ask the same thing.

[ravelfan07]

Was going to ask the same thing.

All I have is the ai recording

[ravelfan07]

All I have is the ai recording

Won’t let me send the recording I have for some reason