I wanted to get a little feedback on my compositions...

[NoamKrief]

https://henselt.org/compositions/rhapsodie.mp3
https://henselt.org/compositions/His_Tears.mp3
https://henselt.org/compositions/impromptu_4.mp3
https://henselt.org/compositions/impromptu_3.mp3

One of them is finished but I have not finished learning it yet sorry about that.

I have no friends or anyone who is interested in classical music so this is the only feedback available to me.
I appreciate it
noam@henselt.org
Noam Krief

[etudes]

i dont know much about composing
but one thing
i love your piece
btw can i have a note?

[Dazzer]

Hi, i'm certainly not the best person to comment on compositions (i've rarely actually completed a piece to the end). and i do think you're capable of producing great stuff someday. but here's my comments

- perhaps try shifting the main voice downwards... say to the middle. All the pieces above all have the top voice as a main. (improm4 is kinda there... but its hardly a melody isit, besides the top voice takes over again)
- they all sound very similar, because of the style. Try a contrasting writing style (especially with the left hand... it irks me a little when i think i'm listening to a variation)
- his_tears is good, cuz i like the 2nds in the pseudo-middle voice. adds a bit of flavour. Should try implementing dissonances in your future compositions. - yummy- i'm personally a fan of 9ths and 13ths.
- some could use abit more development. the idea was there, but it didn't really follow through i think.

overall though, i like the pieces, like some of the progressions are nice too. (I'm guessing alot of the influence comes from henselt... i listened to the recordings on your page).and despite all my comments, i still think you're a better composer than me... hahaha. keep up the good work -thumbs up-

[Doc_Savage]

hi i'm composing too !I can tell you that the first on is probably the best and the other one are pretty good too. Try to impose you an other automatism for the left hand for the next one, it will obligate you to do a different style.You have a real talent

[UncleBEn210]

Good stuff

[Doc_Savage]

DAMN sh*t DAMN the third one is amazing too!

[Doc_Savage]

I've found a way to upload one of my composition, there is 7 other one waiting to be reccorded...anyway, take a look, sorry for the quality i dont have any special micro.


https://www.digitalsoundplanet.com/Members/000170525_000027677.mp3