what is wrong with this sentence?

[BoliverAllmon]

I am curious how many people can actually see what is wrong with this sentence. If you can figure it out then PM and tell me. Don't put the answer here. This is somewhat for school. here is the sentence.



Everyone is entitled to their own practice room.


Boliver

[xvimbi]

[edited] sorry, I did put the answer here, but I quickly removed it. I hope no one have seen it

[BoliverAllmon]

[edited] sorry, I did put the answer here, but I quickly removed it. I hope no one have seen it

thanks for removing it

[Ziggy]

omg like I totally saw it bananzers!!!

[i_m_robot]

ooooooooooopps



no one saw a thing write

[BoliverAllmon]

Everyone is not entitled to his or her own practice room. Share *** it!!!

thanks for screwing up the experiment dipwad

[mikeyg]

hey, come onnow.  im_robot is the man...

But if he says "self' one more time, I'm going to pregnant dog-slap his a$$ around the world.

This is a warning...

DUN DUN DUNNNNN!!!!

[i_m_robot]

thanks for screwing up the experiment dipwad

  your welcome








But in self's defense, people here have a habit of making hour long blabs of posts

so self has gotten used to just skimming for facts

reading everything would take years (or a few minutes)

the sentence caught selfs eyes and the name of the topic caused self to post

wait a minute self said self again

*hides in closet*

hopefully self wont be found here

[BoliverAllmon]

hey, come onnow.  im_robot is the man...

But if he says "self' one more time, I'm going to pregnant dog-slap his a$$ around the world.

This is a warning...

DUN DUN DUNNNNN!!!!

maybe I was a bit overreactive. Sorry, it does prove that many people have forgotten the art of critical thinking. THey just skim around.

boliver

[Regulus Medtner]

In any case, what's so special about the whole thing? I spotted the mistake instantly and English is not even my native language...

[BoliverAllmon]

In any case, what's so special about the whole thing? I spotted the mistake instantly and English is not even my native language...

surprisingly many people won't notice the problem. Society has said that to use the word "he" is sexist and wrong. Using the term he/she is also wrong. Therefore, society uses the word "their".

plus grammar isn't being taught in schools like it use to be.

boliver

[Regulus Medtner]

Oh, I see. The politically correctness thing. You would think that society doesn't have any other REAL problems to deal with...

[tenn]

  your welcome

Whose welcome? And what about it? And everyone isn't entitled to their/his/her own practice room, unless it's at home.

[i_m_robot]

surprisingly many people won't notice the problem. Society has said that to use the word "he" is sexist and wrong. Using the term he/she is also wrong. Therefore, society uses the word "their".

plus grammar isn't being taught in schools like it use to be.

boliver

actually their is now being accepted in its usage

it's no longer wrong it's just not proper

And everyone isn't entitled to their/his/her own practice room, unless it's at home

never were truer words spoken

[Siberian Husky]

Robot=Thug

[BoliverAllmon]

actually their is now being accepted in its usage

it's no longer wrong it's just not proper

anytime something is done incorrectly long enough it becomes the accepted norm.

[prestoconfuoco]

I dun geddit 

ekzplain.....

[i_m_robot]

anytime something is done incorrectly long enough it becomes the accepted norm.

much like the entire english language

[Goldberg]

I dun geddit 

ekzplain.....

Oh, we're just talking about how happy everyone is and how we all love each other.

Anyone care for some Jell-O?

[Siberian Husky]

J
E
L
L
Ohhhh!!

ITS ALLiIiiVE!!

[Goldberg]

Does anybody ELSE want some Jell-O? Speak up!

*nonchalantly tosses a glob of Jell-O at Siberian Husky*

[BoliverAllmon]

much like the entire english language

indeed

[Siberian Husky]

ohhh yeah..serve me up some of that crushed bone by product meal diluted in water OhHh YEAAHHH!! *kool aid man voice*

[BoliverAllmon]

much like the entire english language

well, not the entire language. BET and rednecks help keep the language alive.

boliver

[Dazzer]

I now present the present to the people present at the present time.

[Goldberg]

ohhh yeah..serve me up some of that crushed bone by product meal diluted in water OhHh YEAAHHH!! *kool aid man voice*

You've already been served. You're just gonna have to go to the back of the line and wait for your turn again!


....


*notices that no one else is standing in line...husky and Goldberg stare around idly for a few moments*

Ah! Next in line! Here you go *glops some more Jell-O on husky's plate*.

[BoliverAllmon]

You've already been served. You're just gonna have to go to the back of the line and wait for your turn again!


....


*notices that no one else is standing in line...husky and Goldberg stare around idly for a few moments*

Ah! Next in line! Here you go *glops some more Jell-O on husky's plate*.

you and SBH need a girl. Someone to occupy your time instead of doing things like this. LOL