I’ve thought quite some time about whether to respond to the summary Beryl made of my contributions to this thread, and I have decided that I must.
I've made myself a summary of this thread which I reprint here in case anyone besides myself finds it useful :
I’m not exactly sure here what “it” is that is to be found useful – the summary, or the original posts - but, in either case, the objection I have is that this summary is apparently being presented as something others can effectively use as a substitute for reading the more lengthy original posts (otherwise, why post it?), when there is far more to be “obtained” from them than the summary.
I think personal summaries (“notes”, if you will) for one’s own use privately are to be expected and acceptable, but, on a public forum, even if it is presented merely as such, I think it almost certainly diminishes the author’s original work - especially if it appears at the end of the same thread on which the authors’ were posted.
If after each of my posts there appeared such a “summary” of what I had just written, I certainly would have said something about it at that time, and I am no less inclined to do so now. I don’t think anyone would ever do such a ridiculous thing, but I think that the mere passage of time, and its position on the thread, does not make this summary any less so. Rather than flattering, to me it’s insulting.
The summary may very well help Bernhard or Beryl, or other readers of the original posts, to remember these AND OTHER ideas which were expressed within them, but it will definitely not do the same for those who have read the summary and then, because of its inadequacy, choose NOT to read the originals which they supposedly summarize. That is exactly what I fear will happen and that would be a shame.
I also think that it is fair to say that whether a personal summary accurately represents the intent of the author’s work is, at the very least, debatable and, therefore, if it even appears at all, should be separated from it – in this case, on a thread of its own.
Of course I did precisely this same thing in my first post, but I did so with the caveat that Mastering the Chopin Etudes should be read by folks interested in playing “ultra-fast” arpeggios. In other words, while attempting to paraphrase what Abby had said, I pointedly directed readers to the original work. No such direction appears in the summary presented above and, in my opinion, would be counter-productive even if it contained such direction.
In a world now so dominated by “scientific” thinking – where things are dissected and analyzed in agonizing minutiae (even to the detriment of the intended goal) – there is an irresistible desire to accomplish things faster and more efficiently. But just as life itself cannot be “ascertained” from a living being which has been dissected to the molecule, the “life force” or behavior required for great piano performance likewise cannot be “summarized” from an artful attempt at its description.
Regardless of how others interpret them, I intended my posts more as works of art which may instill in their readers a glimpse of what it is like to play the piano and maybe inspire them to attempt it for themselves, rather than as the uninspiring piano-playing “recipe” of the summary.
How can one “sum up” what is intended as a work of art, as opposed to a piece-of-furniture painting, or background-noise music? (What IS art, anyway?)
I am startled by every painting I see, even though I may have seen its photograph a thousand times before, and I am startled every time I sit next to a performer and watch and listen, even though I’ve heard and seen recordings of the piece a thousand times before.
I believe someone who has read that summary will be similarly startled if they then undertake to read the “originals” which it supposedly summarizes.
Photos of paintings and statues, summaries of written works, and recordings of musical performances are merely “shadows” or “tracks” of a reality which has been brought to life by “a something” that I was attempting to describe in my posts – in the case of the latter, an intimate understanding of the piano’s mechanism and the all-encompassing dance which the player must wittingly or unwittingly employ to effectively “interact” with it.
Unlike “skeletons” or outlines (summaries) of music - where the harmonic and melodic foundation of the piece can be fully exposed to the light of day - the “melody” of written speech is a far more difficult thing to discern. Different readers will “hear” different melodies. So, just the same as in music, it must not be tampered with too much or the overall effect – the real purpose for its creation and the “whole” which is greater than the sum of its parts – may very well be lost and is at the least certainly diminished.
And also just like a musical composition, if what is being “described” by a “composer” cannot be grasped by the reader in its entirety on the first – or the thousandth – reading, its realization will certainly not be achieved by removing and “stacking up” its “notes”. What is needed is elaboration of ideas, not diminution and, if anything, that is precisely what is needed at the end of this thread instead of a “summary”.
After reading the summary, will the reader read the original work? I very much doubt it. In fact, they may very well conclude from reading Beryl’s summary that “what herve is trying to give you is carpal tunnels” – a comment which only appeared after the summary’s belated appearance. (What a coincidence!)
As I now give an example of the inadequacy of the summary, I will be guilty of doing precisely that which I have just criticized – taking something out of the context of “the whole” that diminishes it as well as its own part within it.
The summary does not contain these statements that I consider to be of utmost importance to anyone studying the piano:
“It is not simply a desire to be “expressive” that should drive one to develop a whole-body rhythmic technique - it is because, particularly when many strings of the piano must speak in a short period of time, that it is the only way the task can be accomplished. Ultimately, it is the “resistive” mechanism of the piano which commands this of its player.”
Once again, what if the reader of what is purported to be an accurate summary of previous posts (and the unqualified “Nice summary!” endorsement which follows it) decides NOT to read the original posts? Just because Beryl did not think that this was important enough to mention does not mean that another reader would come to the same conclusion. Obviously, I’d like the reader to have the opportunity to decide that for him/herself.
Of course this forum is a “free for all” place where anyone can post pretty much anything within taste and with sensitivity to others and that summary certainly meets those easy criteria.
I have also chosen to indulge in that same freedom.
For the reasons I’ve detailed above, I don’t like the summary and I would have preferred that this thread would never have again seen the light of “Page-1 day” rather than once again be given prominence by it.
I encourage any person who has never read this thread in its entirety to please do so rather than rely only on the summary to convey what I and others have tried to express.