post your compositions here!!

[db05]

Ouch, my compostion took 2 years to make and it sounds weird! Sorry, this was before I took theory lessons. 

Etude for Two Guitars, "The spark is gone..."
based on a text by AM Cortez, "The March 11 Bus"

I used to write lyrics too.




Now don't be shy. Post your stuff here.

[frank_48]

i would but mine are unfinished + i dont have anyway to upload them even if they were, nice piece though db,

[db05]

i would but mine are unfinished + i dont have anyway to upload them even if they were, nice piece though db,

Awww thanks.
I want to cheer up loonbohol and talk about composition.

[jabbz]

If someone wants my scores they can buy them.



Seriously! 

[loonbohol]

Fine this is what Db_05 is asking me. 

My photo, my compositions. especially Hinata no.3 it sucks.

[shinerl]

Fine this is what Db_05 is asking me. 

My photo, my compositions. especially Hinata no.3 it sucks.

Hinata Opus 1 Number 3   

OMG! You are what composer?  Unbelievable. I can swear that It is a happy song that can relieve stress and now you got game.     It did not suck.

Show your other Hinata's they are cool.     
I believe you should enroll at Yamaha composers in Japan and study music theory.
Yamaha students are also good composers.

About the person on that picture who is that person. Is that a performer what was that all about.

speaking of Hinata as the title of your compositions then it is really a sunny place
Your sweet Loonbohol

[db05]

If someone wants my scores they can buy them.

Seriously! 

Don't know if I can afford it...

About the person on that picture who is that person. Is that a performer what was that all about.

That's loonbohol! You should post your picture too, I already got mine in the pictures thread.

I like hinata 3 too! It sounds... cute... Like... pinoypianist...

Hey, what do you think about my composition?

[healdie]

Bravo i have listened to the Hinata and i think you already have improved since the impromtu, did you perform these pieces? your harmonic vocabluary has greatly extended since the last ones personally i felt it was slightly too long so i woul remove a couple of the repeats and i would try to make the ending carry more weight (again thats how i would do it and obviously can' tell how to make your art)

but overall i did enjoy it keep it up

 I will try to upload some of mine when they are finished

[db05]

Hinata is HYPNOTIC. I have to say it since I have been listening to it for more than 15 mins already. And my mind just went blank!! 

I don't know if that's a good thing.

[loonbohol]

Hinata is HYPNOTIC. I have to say it since I have been listening to it for more than 15 mins already. And my mind just went blank!! 

I don't know if that's a good thing.

I just posted my picture on this blog Kyokai.jpg

we'll you guess the title of hinata opus 1 number 3 which is Higurashi hinata
or in english means Cicada's or cricket

[shinerl]

Hinata is HYPNOTIC. I have to say it since I have been listening to it for more than 15 mins already. And my mind just went blank!! 

I don't know if that's a good thing.

Yeah It did and it was never boring. I cannot take it out of my mind.
What is this CIA.

[cai hong]

loonbohol's 'Hinata' is cuuuuuute I think! It reminds me of GBA...yeah GBA with cute chiptune melodies ^ ^.And...ummm I pretty agree with db.Hinata sure is hpynotic lol oops sorry are you...offended?

[concerto_love]

loonbohol's 'Hinata' is cuuuuuute I think! It reminds me of GBA...yeah GBA with cute chiptune melodies ^ ^.And...ummm I pretty agree with db.Hinata sure is hpynotic lol oops sorry are you...offended?

Agree... aaww, guys, u r so cool... Even cai can make her own piece T_T All that I can do is making short piece depends on the mood for my sister and brother so they can 'dance' at home...

[pinoypianist]

I like hinata 3 too! It sounds... cute... Like... pinoypianist...

Me? Cute?

[db05]

Me? Cute?

Cute in a weird way

[pinoypianist]

haha.

BTW you want to watch the finals of NAMCYA? its on Nov. 11 6pm at the cultural center

[db05]

haha.

BTW you want to watch the finals of NAMCYA? its on Nov. 11 6pm at the cultural center

I don't know... We have to prepare for recital on December. Hope you can watch this time.

[Petter]

I r very serious composers, I have composeth a new melody on a given tune, it´s a chanzonna variation, enjoy my new melody. AND TURN UP THE VOLUME

[0range]

I have just taken all of your compositions and will be playing them from now on as my own.

Thanks in advance for any babes I get on account of my creativity! 

[loonbohol]

loonbohol's 'Hinata' is cuuuuuute I think! It reminds me of GBA...yeah GBA with cute chiptune melodies ^ ^.And...ummm I pretty agree with db.Hinata sure is hpynotic lol oops sorry are you...offended?

GREAT! I just based my style in composing in GBA game soundtracks.
Love it and no matter how repeated you play the song. You never get tired.

We'll I believe that I should compose in that style and so I compose the Hinata songs just like the way Japanese composers compose Game soundtracks.

We'll speaking of the Hinata's. We'll it was composed as an experiment for me to improve my composing skills especially when it should come in describing something.
We'll composers should know how to direct their music to the target it should hit.

We'll the Hinata's that I composed are my perception of this anime and GBA game named https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Love_Hina then I am planning to compose up to seven of them.
So I

By the way. The hinata I posted was Hinata No.3 and hinata no.3 is Shinobu Maehara

[db05]

I have just taken all of your compositions and will be playing them from now on as my own.

Thanks in advance for any babes I get on account of my creativity! 

Fine, I'm sure someone would be suspect that those can't possibly be written by the same person.

By the way. The hinata I posted was Hinata No.3 and hinata no.3 is Shinobu Maehara

I hardly remember Love Hina. But yeah it does feel like Shinobu now that you mention it.

I prefer to relate music to words, since I still have a lot of poems not yet set to music. I suppose composers go beyond that and play with the tones on their own, in the abstract. But I looooooove lyrical music when it works out.

[0range]

[quote="db05]Fine, I'm sure someone would be suspect that those can't possibly be written by the same person.[/quote]

I think you may be underestimating the depth of my schizophrenia.

[db05]

I think you may be underestimating the depth of my schizophrenia.

Good for you. You have my permission to play my work then, as it suits you. I'll be back with more. 

Edit:
Sorry Petter, am using a laptop so I can't turn up the volume any more. I can barely hear it.

[loonbohol]

I have just taken all of your compositions and will be playing them from now on as my own.

Thanks in advance for any babes I get on account of my creativity! 

We'll I cannot believe that Orange is gonna perform our compositions and copyright it as his own. (Correct me if I am wrong. 

But we'll the good thing is that I still have Hinata no.1, Hinata No.2 , Hinata no.4
Hinata no.5 , Hinata no.6 and Hinata no.7 which is currently in production.
Hinata no.2 is the most beautifullest among these pieces. 

[concerto_love]

So it's from love hina?!  wooow!!!

[loonbohol]

So it's from love hina?!  wooow!!!

You mis-understood it somehow.
I mean that I composed a song which theme is about Love Hina.
Not spork a song or composition on Love Hina.
I mean it is originally my composition and Love Hina inspired to make that song.
I am planning to make seven and now I will almost finish seven of them.

I don't know how I finish seven of them in a month and it is a miracle but according to my calculations that If I compose constantly at that rate then  I would have finished 1200 compositions at the age of 65 and How can I imagine how many songs would I have composed then. 

[0range]

We'll I cannot believe that Orange is gonna perform our compositions and copyright it as his own. (Correct me if I am wrong. 

I will probably never get around to copyrighting, I'll probably just claim them as my own to impress people.

[db05]

I will probably never get around to copyrighting, I'll probably just claim them as my own to impress people.

I think loonbohol should take that as a compliment. 

[shinerl]

I think loonbohol should take that as a compliment. 

YES he misunderstood. we'll hinata's is the next generation of music.

[deshaiesm]

I love the idea to listen to some composition, even if you think it sounds weird. More please !

[db05]

I love the idea to listen to some composition, even if you think it sounds weird. More please !

I got something cooking. It's only half done, but here! I'll finish it soon.

Waltz in Bm "Dance of (Distortion) Destruction"
Originally for a band (distorted guitars, loud drumming and what-have-you), I transposed it in a minor key and transcribed it for solo piano.
Based on a poem by diablong buang.

Edit: made it a bit slower, as per someone's suggestion.
Edit2: I'm bored, so I edited the dynamics. Remember, this is still incomplete! I had 2 downloads by this time, but that's gonna disappear. Enjoy! 

[mr music]

  But now I like it even more! It's a pity though computers cannot put any expression into the music! I know you've added dynamics into the computer, but still I cannot feel it.

I was a little confused about the title, but you did not tell me this piece is being composed based on a poem by Diablong Buang, now I am more intrigued. Where can I find this?

Have you ever listened to Shostakovich's orchestral score to "The Overcoat" ? (this may inspire). When I am confused I put this on.

I find a musical piece can never finished whether writing my own or playing others as I am always changing dynamics, tempos etc. Maybe a change in tempo would be better somewhere down the track when you think it is finished – jury still out.

[alexalin]

Only with theory lessons how can you go for composition.Try ti take some practical lessons it would be better for you and your compositions.

[mr music]

Wouldn’t composition come from the heart?

[db05]

Only with theory lessons how can you go for composition.Try ti take some practical lessons it would be better for you and your compositions.

I don't know exactly what you mean, but I think those practical lessons on composing are included later in my music couse... IF I pass for 3rd year. *fingers crossed*

I don't know... some people can go improvising and composing with minimal formal training... and it turns out fine somtimes. Maybe you suggest this to me because I sound old-fashioned??

Wouldn’t composition come from the heart?

Too simple. Heart and mind, sweetie. Don't forget the mind. 

But now I like it even more! It's a pity though computers cannot put any expression into the music! I know you've added dynamics into the computer, but still I cannot feel it.

I was a little confused about the title, but you did not tell me this piece is being composed based on a poem by Diablong Buang, now I am more intrigued. Where can I find this?

Have you ever listened to Shostakovich's orchestral score to "The Overcoat" ? (this may inspire). When I am confused I put this on.

Wow, thanks. I got a fan?!?!
Okay. diablong buang is my deviantart username, and what db stands for. It's like my screen name. But I'm still shy about putting up poetry on here... 

LOL about distortion. I just put it in for fun. It's plain "Dance of Destruction".

I have no idea. The only Shostakovich record we have is an old vinyl. Its contents are still unknown to me.

[loonbohol]

I got something cooking. It's only half done, but here! I'll finish it soon.

Waltz in Bm "Dance of (Distortion) Destruction"
Originally for a band (distorted guitars, loud drumming and what-have-you), I transposed it in a minor key and transcribed it for solo piano.
Based on a poem by diablong buang.

Edit: made it a bit slower, as per someone's suggestion.
Edit2: I'm bored, so I edited the dynamics. Remember, this is still incomplete! I had 2 downloads by this time, but that's gonna disappear. Enjoy! 

I get it right. It is cute but it is not difficult to perform

Wouldn’t composition come from the heart?

That is the problem with some composers who use emotions without their minds.
They get wasted.

[db05]

I get it right. It is cute but it is not difficult to perform

That is good, maybe I can learn to play it.

Edit:
Now here it is. All the parts. What I meant by "editing the dynamics" was just making the lead voice louder. It seems I'm not able to change much, I tried to do a ritard too but I think I ended up faking it. And if you notice someting's missing in the harmony, that's because some of the bass notes were eaten in the editing.  Argh!!!

Enjoy! Sorry if it sounds too weird! 

[mr music]

I once had a teacher that tried to get me to like Bach this may do the trick. When can we download the sheet music. Only joking!

You sing DB (with or without poetry… lol)

[db05]

I once had a teacher that tried to get me to like Bach this may do the trick. When can we download the sheet music. Only joking!

You sing DB (with or without poetry… lol)

Either I sing solfeggio... or I sing terribly! I'm a terrible pop singer. You know how they try to sing loud ALL THE TIME and modulate higher and higher toward the end? Don't make me do that! 

Oh, Bach is just, either you like him or you don't. My favorite Baroque is Scarlatti, after listening to him Bach becomes easier to appreciate.

[mr music]

Never heard you sing, I was talking about your piano composition. But since you brought it up, by all means put a song on Denza or Massenet would be nice.

I think you are probably right about Bach. Either you love it or hate it. I bow to him (Johann Sebastian) though, he tuned the world up-side-down with his ps & fs. But he just doesn’t appeal to me - I'm more of a romantic, really.

NB. You don't really watch those idol shows, do you?

[loonbohol]

About your composition. It sounds Mahler .  Are you a fan of Mahler.
but I can say that you are a more betterer composer than me.   

Because you are a Yamaha prodigy.   
Sweet is'nt it but I can perform my own composition which some of them are hard as Level 8.

We'll you are a good performer too.

[db05]

NB. You don't really watch those idol shows, do you?

Actually, I did. A couple seasons of American Idol. At least it's a lot better than the local spinoffs and the local franchise itself was the worst.

About your composition. It sounds Mahler .  Are you a fan of Mahler.
but I can say that you are a more betterer composer than me.  

Never heard Mahler yet, but I hear he's pretty good! I take that as a compliment. No, you're the better composer. And I can't perform this, since I only notated it on my computer.

We'll you are a good performer too.

The best performer of Minuet in G. Didn't you know, I suck...

btw, please study English grammar.

[loonbohol]

I love minuet in G by Beethoven

[db05]

I love minuet in G by Beethoven

You overestimate me. I meant Minuet in G in the First Lessons in Bach book.

[theusiv]

Hello everyone,

Just a newbie from around. I also got some composition for the piano. The title is "Kulintangan".  The work is currently in progress; however, I posted it here for some comments that will help me gain perspective of its technicalities.


God Speed,


theusiv

[loonbohol]

Hello everyone,

Just a newbie from around. I also got some composition for the piano. The title is "Kulintangan".  The work is currently in progress; however, I posted it here for some comments that will help me gain perspective of its technicalities.


God Speed,


theusiv

I love it and it is like a kumintang.
Are you a filipino by any chance.
It also gives me another reason to post more compositions here.
even if I hate glissando's.

[theusiv]

Hi loon,

You are asking if I am a Filipino? Yap I am!! I am from Zambales.

[db05]

Hi loon,

You are asking if I am a Filipino? Yap I am!! I am from Zambales.

I knew it, LOL!! Hey, kabayan! I'm from Laguna.

[aewanko]

I'll post the sheet music of my composition right after I scan it. It won't be long.

[loonbohol]

Hi loon,

You are asking if I am a Filipino? Yap I am!! I am from Zambales.

I am from Bohol.