Again... the same comment as I did on La Campanella. You do to many misstakes. You aren't ready for Liszt. None will get impressed if you play Liszt, without playing it good. Sorry, but this isn't well played, even if you are without teacher.
mean playing it well
I admire your courage for posting your playing...but in all honesty, this performance is totally unrecognizable. It's obviously a very difficult piece...this is the kind of piece professionals struggle with...but the rhythm is almost completely incomprehensible and about 60% of the notes are wrong.Have you heard a recording of the piece? If I were you I'd practice the piece very slowly, with metronome, hands seperately. Pay attention to rhythm, and don't speed it up until you're rhythm is perfect at a snail's pace. Keep in mind that great pianists like Berezovsky, Arrau, Cziffra play it in about 2:00-2:10 range (which is plenty fast). Of the few people who play it in under two minutes, Lazar Berman is the only one who can really pull it off convincingly.
Thanks to Michel Dvorsky for useful, constructive advice and criticism!