Bernard~
I have listened to the first recording in which I'm familiar with and you played it
very nicely but need to put more rubato and diverse dynamics. The sections that repeats, you can alter the dynamics and change the moods so that everything doesn't sound the same. This piece has to be played from your heart with feelings and sink your fingers down into the keys to bring out the lyrical tone of the melody.
Now about the Turkish March, keep in mind it is a March and therefore the tempo has to be steady. Keep it stead and clean throughout the piece. And I'm sure it will improve.

You are trying your best, but it takes time and practice to become a fine pianist and to
have an inner understanding about the pieces you are learning and I'm sure you are musical, I can hear that in your recordings, that you have a sensitivity in your piano playing. Just
keep setting those goals and work on the pieces that are not too difficult also so that the more challenging pieces will come along in time.
A year ago I have begun to learn Chopin's Etude No. 10 Op. 1 and now I can play it with both hands in a moderate tempo. Keep in mind this Etude has been a challenge for me to learn, but I can play it and enjoy its beautiful harmonies.
best wishes,
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