Schumann Arabesque - take 2 - please comment

[yiyiku]

Someone commented that the grace notes in my first post of this piece 'stick out' too much; please comment if you like it better in this version. thank you for listening!

original post is here
https://www.pianostreet.com/smf/index.php?topic=37107.0

[prongated]

Yep, that's me

And no, I think the grace note is going in the wrong direction. In fact, I don't know what possessed me to write what I did, but in the first take there were only a few that could be done nicer. They're generally fine! I apologise for misleading you

Curiously, mine isn't necessarily any better, but

https://www.pianostreet.com/smf/index.php?topic=23596.0

[pianowolfi]

I like both interpretations, prongated's and your's.

There is one word in German which describes much of what Schumann wanted and what both of you actually display, it's the word "innig". ( =~heartfelt)