First of all, let me say that was superb musicianship. SO musical and mature. A beautiful tone, a moving line, deeply thought out. Really wonderful playing. There were some technical problems but they will be ironed out in time.
I only have two observations. Your melodic conception is great. We never lose the train of thought. It's presence is intense throughout. BUT, you overlook many many of the chords in the left hand. It's quite constant. Like you aren't really considering the importance of the harmonies. The most notable example, of course is at 0:12 and 1:42. Where is the b natural in the left hand? It's a leading tone going to the c. I don't hear it at all. But there are many more places. Take the music and follow the recording and you will be aware of it as well. Once you've mastered these harmonic structures as well, it will be quite perfect!
The final chords should be in time. You did a great job in the coda and the excitement is sort of lost when you broaden out those chords at the end.
A very poetic interpretation. Bravo!