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gaptrast

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Own composition :D

on: March 30, 2012, 08:52:50 PM

Hi,

what do you think of my homemade song? I posted a shorter version of it some days ago here..

langsang.mp3 (5624.98 kB - downloaded 60 times.)

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animae

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Re: Own composition :D

Reply #1 on: April 07, 2012, 10:16:51 AM

It's good but the right hand melody doesn't sound right.

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rachchopin

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Re: Own composition :D

Reply #2 on: April 10, 2012, 01:32:50 PM

I like it! I find it relaxing.

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pianowolfi

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Re: Own composition :D

Reply #3 on: April 10, 2012, 08:00:43 PM

Quote from: animae on April 07, 2012, 10:16:51 AM

It's good but the right hand melody doesn't sound right.

I don't get that comment. What exactly doesn't sound right in the right hand, and where?

I liked the short version actually better

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