It's obviously getting better, so you're on the right track

There are two things I don't like.
For me, you still don't care enought about the middle voice. I hear one note here, and one note there, but never the whole thing.
The other thing is the way you present yourself.
I have a bit of difficulties to listen to someone who, even before we can listen, says it's rather bad (or at least that's how i interpret the "OMF AGAIN?!?!" Everyone knows they're very difficult, especially if you don't have piano as a profession. So you really don't have to worry about them being difficult. You do you're best, and no one will think anything else.