Original piano composition - Smile

[poetofthefall21]

Here's my newest composition titled Smile and I'd like to hear some feedback if possible. Thanks!:)

[awesom_o]

It's better than your last offering.

I can hear that you have made some effort with developing the RH a bit, but the effect is still that of a Theme with a bunch of variations that don't have any variation.

Have you played the works of many other composers? It will help you develop your musical voice.

[jittqm]

A pianissimo for meditation!

I tend to attack the piano in my compositions, so will have to try a soft piano piece like yours.

Thankyou

[poetofthefall21]

It's better than your last offering.

I can hear that you have made some effort with developing the RH a bit, but the effect is still that of a Theme with a bunch of variations that don't have any variation.

Have you played the works of many other composers? It will help you develop your musical voice.

Thank you for your feedback! Yes, I decided to use grace notes as some people advised me to make my compositions sound better. I still have a lot to learn about the composing, thank you for your feedback!

[poetofthefall21]

A pianissimo for meditation!

I tend to attack the piano in my compositions, so will have to try a soft piano piece like yours.

Thankyou

Thank you very much! My piano skill at the moment allows me only to make soft, simple pieces like this...

[awesom_o]

Why not study the bravura style? It will help you to develop beyond the confines of tranquility...