Thanks for looking at it chopinlover, I appreciate it.
I stand by the tempo, but I can imagine it done well faster, your comment is fair though.
I also know I took a risk doing the roll that way, perhaps I could've done it a little better but I thought I saw an opportunity to do something interesting and a little different so I took it. I believe in trying to do that sort of thing, even if sometimes people don't like it.