Prokofiev Sonata Op. 28

[rubinsteinmad]

Hi,

 This is only the first section of this 1-movement sonata, and yet I make countless horrible blobs.  But this is my first upload in the Audition Room, so....


Yeah, sorry for this topic. It's basically spam.

https://soundcloud.com/dong-harris/prokofiev-sonata-3-take-2

[ajlongspiano]

Hey RSMad,

Great job on this! Lots of nice ideas/beautiful things.

I would personally work on having more intense swells. I've always seen this piece as being very distraught and even scary in a sense. Like on those opening E major chords try to have mini crescendos, diminuendos and subito fortes to keep everything on edge. These are just a couple of vague things to keep in mind. Try to find that " demonic element " as they call it. I'm sure you know what I'm talking about . Keep up the good work! This is a great piece that works really well in concerts/competitions etc..

- AJ

[rubinsteinmad]

Hey RSMad,

Great job on this! Lots of nice ideas/beautiful things.

I would personally work on having more intense swells. I've always seen this piece as being very distraught and even scary in a sense. Like on those opening E major chords try to have mini crescendos, diminuendos and subito fortes to keep everything on edge. These are just a couple of vague things to keep in mind. Try to find that " demonic element " as they call it. I'm sure you know what I'm talking about . Keep up the good work! This is a great piece that works really well in concerts/competitions etc..

- AJ

OK, I will. My (new ) teacher has been constantly talking about that demonic element at the beginning, which I never seem to do well

I'm an angel 

[schumaniac]

this is good... but I agree with missing the "demonic" element... Prokofiev wasn't a very compromising or "nice" person; I think you smoothed out a lot of the "rough edges" of the piece

[rubinsteinmad]

again: a little sevvie playing this?? such madness

anyway, this is good... but I agree with missing the "demonic" element... Prokofiev wasn't a very compromising or "nice" person; I think you smoothed out a lot of the "rough edges" of the piece

but don't worry
I did that too "when I was your age"

How did you know I'm a sevvie?

Do you know my last name?

I hope you don't guess it. There's not many Chinese last names out there... (hint I don't have a Chinese last name because my ancestors were the immigrants, so over time there was some mixing )

Hint: The reason I cant play demonic is cause I'm an Angel

[dogperson]

How did you know I'm a sevvie?

Do you know my last name?

I hope you don't guess it. There's not many Chinese last names out there... (hint I don't have a Chinese last name because my ancestors were the immigrants, so over time there was some mixing )

Hint: The reason I cant play demonic is cause I'm an Angel

Your full name is visible on your SoundCloud account   

[rubinsteinmad]

Your full name is visible on your SoundCloud account   

Your full name is visible on your SoundCloud account   

That's not my real last name hehehehehehhehehe

***the Mephisto Waltz starts playing***

Wait- I'm supposed to be an ANGEL...

***Ave Maria starts playing***

[schumaniac]

How did you know I'm a sevvie?

Do you know my last name?

I hope you don't guess it. There's not many Chinese last names out there... (hint I don't have a Chinese last name because my ancestors were the immigrants, so over time there was some mixing )

Hint: The reason I cant play demonic is cause I'm an Angel

1) you SAID you were 12
2) no,  how would I know it?

[rubinsteinmad]

1) you SAID you were 12
2) no,  how would I know it?

Hey, but I could be in 6th or 8th grade

[rubinsteinmad]

It's so weird that I basically gave you my last name but vous etes si stupide that you can't guess it.

[visitor]

 

[swagmaster420x]

It's so weird that I basically gave you my last name but vous etes si stupide that you can't guess it.

I predict that that means you are so stupid. That's so stupid though, since I feel like si should be if like in spanish.
I think it's actually pretty amazing that a middle schooler can play piano this goodly x|
Is your last name an Angel?

[rubinsteinmad]

Is your last name an Angel?

................................................. delete that post, NOW

[swagmaster420x]

................................................. delete that post, NOW

Nice troll

[rubinsteinmad]

Nice troll

IT is not a troll. It is serious. For privacy reasons.

[schumaniac]

It's so weird that I basically gave you my last name but vous etes si stupide that you can't guess it.

yeah I'm not good w figuring out implied stuff but after someone says "you're so stupid!!" then that somehow makes my mind work to figure it out

[schumaniac]

blhiu

[rubinsteinmad]

So.... why wasn't the post deleted? Now EVERYONE knows my name

[schumaniac]

blhiu

[swagmaster420x]

i was out all day so i just now deleted my post. Honestly though, you woulda modified your above posts if you actually cared

woops cant delete it for some reason, modify button isnt there.

honestly this new system where you can't modify posts after a certain time period is dog sh1t
Can a mod do something about this