Original Piano Composition: Spanish Capriccio

[mozarta]

Hi,

I have posted a piano composition called "Spanish Capriccio" (it is a dynamic piece) if you want to check it out and let me know your opinion.

Thanks.

[anacrusis]

Nice one! I think you captured a spanish-sounding idiom very well 

[mozarta]

Thanks a lot, I really appreciate it!

[kalospiano]

Nicely done Mozarta! Can certainly imagine this piece to impress the crowd with its fast pace and technicalities. The only critique that I can move is that the ending seemed a bit too abrupt to me: I would have liked some longer development.

[ranjit]

I can see you used the Andalusian cadence

[ranjit]

I liked the variation at 0:52. I might steal that idea for the future.

[getsiegs]

Very nice piece, I also liked 0:52 a lot. I know it seems to be variations on one idea, but maybe you could try shaking up the chord progression a little bit. Also your technique at 0:15 is interesting - I don't know if I've ever really seen LH jumps taken with 3 and 4 rather than 5. Not a negative or anything, I just found it unique and thought I'd mention it 

[mozarta]

Thanks a lot for these detailed comments! Helpful and interesting feedbacks.
 

[quantum]

You incorporated a lot of Spanish characteristics here.  One thing you could do is to alternate between a contrasting theme. 

At 0:27 you might want to work on your RH, as your hand shape is awkward and looks tense. 

[mozarta]

Thanks for the feedback, with regards to hands positioning: I have an autodidact training so the hand position I use is not academical (only suitable to my playing).